The difference is clearest when we look at the book's premise. While many sections (the author bio, my platform, the audience) stayed mostly the same, the premise of the book changed pretty radically, despite having essentially the same theme. Here's the premise as it appeared in my first proposal:
If I come across a bunch of people sitting outside my church selling doves and changing money, I know I should make a whip out of ropes and turn their tables over and yell at them. But what is the most Christ-like action when buying my lunch at McDonald's? Should I buy a Filet-O-Fish sandwich? Should I turn a milkshake into wine? I spend my life guessing what Jesus would do instead of living like him. Is there a way I can get to know the real Jesus instead of inventing my own? Imaginary Jesus will help identify places in our lives where we've adopted a false Jesus for our own convenience, and talk about real, practical ways to connect with the living, breathing Christ.
The man who eventually became my agent (Wes Yoder of Ambassador Literary), as I shared in my post on Rachelle's blog, told me to take another shot at it, but emphasizing the story-telling stuff and minimizing what he called the "Sunday School lessons." That weekend I feverishly wrote about six chapters of "Imaginary Jesus Reimagined" and sent them off to Wes. He got back to me right away, and here was the new and improved premise we used to describe the book once I finished writing it (now that it was fiction instead of non-fiction, I needed to finish the book, not just outline it):
Sitting in a coffee shop with Jesus, Matt Mikalatos realizes that the pleasant, robed man across the table is not the real Jesus at all. During Matt’s attempt to destroy the imposter and find the real Jesus, Imaginary Jesus escapes. Now the Lamb is on the lam and Matt is on a quest to find the living, breathing Christ. With the help of the apostle Peter, a talking donkey and the mysterious Motorcycle Guy, he chases Jesus across the city of
Portland/city>/place>, determined to exorcise his imaginary friend. A fast-paced, hilarious novel, Imaginary Jesus explores what it means to be in relationship with a physically absent but relationally present Jesus.
As you can see, that's a pretty drastically different book... although the title and "living, breathing Christ" made it into both. I like that phrase pretty well.
Next Tuesday I'll post some thoughts about getting an agent. For those of you who are in the process of looking for an agent now, I think you'll find it helpful... there are a lot of things I did that you can do just as easily.
I'd be glad to answer other questions you might have about writing, book proposals, finding an agent, Jesus, butterflies, the average speed of an African swallow or anything else that interests you. You can leave a comment here or send me a note at matt.mikalatos (at) gmail.com.
Jsut stopping by to say "hi!" I read your post at Rachelle's and now you have another soul who is planning on buying your book. Is that cool or what? Who'd have thunk you could sell books by being weird? If I knew that, I'd have been on the NYT Best Sellers list YEARS ago! LOL! Well, maybe not. But I hope to see you there.ReplyDelete
Good luck & Best wishes on you book!
Your post on Ms. Gardner's blog is the best I have read there, ever. I'm trying to find the balance between writing what I love and listening to all of the professionals; everyone has a different idea of what and how I should write or structure my book and trying to incorporate their advice actually freezes the progress of my work. How do you tune out all of the--admittedly good--voices? How do you know when to let them speak and allow influence? I don't want to be hard-headed because lets face it: I am merely aspirational for now, but I dream.ReplyDelete
Your book sounds fascinating and I can't wait to read it!
Loved the post pver at Rachelle's blog. Thanks for sharing your inner-weird and encouraging us fellow writers to embrace ours!ReplyDelete
Wishing you the best with the book . . .
Hi, Matt! Glad I found you. Too bad Rachelle isn't your agent but hey we can't all have perfection...! I am looking forward to reading your book. My daughter is at university in Canada and very involved with Campus for Christ over there. Great ministry.ReplyDelete
Stop by and say hey sometime, I'm blogging too.
I really enjoyed your post. I can't wait to hang out at your blog.ReplyDelete
Loved your post at Rachelle's blog, Matt. I think I've leaned too far now in trying to rein in My Inner Weird. At least for first draft novel writing, that doesn't work too well for me. I'm pulling out the stops! OK, maybe not ALL of them, but quite a few.... :)ReplyDelete
Hey, found you through Rachelle's blog too and loved it. I'm following you on Twitter as well. I am interested in your followup post on agents so I'll be back. Hope this gives you tons of platform exposure. Great job!ReplyDelete
I'm totally excited to make you another ally in my quest for publication. Post away, Matt!ReplyDelete
Enjoyed viewing the before and after! Can't wait to get/read the book!ReplyDelete
I haven't been on Rachelle's blog in awhile, but popped over there tonight and read your post. Thank you. I needed to hear this.ReplyDelete